Keep in mind I’ve been a writer for years, so I’m always looking how to make the piece better.
I don’t think you need the Manager. He takes away from the main Four. He could be referenced but never seen.
Did the Tonnocus die of Covid?
Interesting concept and storyline but I would go back in and do another rewrite. ...
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ROB STEVENShaineshisway.com certified reviewerJune 10, 2023
A very choppy script with a lot of very short scenes....
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