Wonderful writing. There were many poetic lines I wish I could’ve written down to remember for later. Drew definitely has a way with words. I like his style, and look forward to more of his work in the future.
What I didn't like
Ditch this question, HFF. You ask me what can be improved when I write a review, but then when you print the review you label it as “What I didn’t like.” Feels misleading.
My overall impression
An artistic deep dive into an emotional experience we can all relate to—lost love. Drew’s metaphor of navigating a literal heart to process a break-up was both clever and poignant.