It’s a really important story that these two are sharing and it needs to be shared. The use of projection and simple staging was also very compelling. Keep working and writing – especially with this work, I could see something like this on adapted screen.
What I didn't like
I feel there could have been more urgency and higher stakes especially during the middle when they are in the jail cell – it was almost literally a life/death moment and I felt it was played a little too casual. Only note!
My overall impression
An important and compelling story with some great acting!