Four

Keep in mind I’ve been a writer for years, so I’m always looking how to make the piece better. I don’t think you need the Manager. He takes away from the main Four. He could be referenced but never seen. Did the Tonnocus die of Covid? Interesting concept and storyline but I would go back in and do another rewrite. ... full review

A little slow, but it has its moments. Love the entrances of the sleazy Hassim played with truth and honesty, and great vocal power by Bong Cabrera, i wish his character could be developed more. i like Kiki played by Melissa Folzenlogen who is the only actor playing an actual instrument. I wish she could play more live music. Roger played by Michael Lamb has his moments too, but can’t hear him most of the time. Ayodele played by Tonoccus McClain had a great singing voice. Violet on the other hand played by Katherine Lee seems nervous all the time and keeps on looking at the audience. The story has potentials, but needs to be develop more.... full review

The story revolves around a string quartet and their manager who recently have lost one of their players. The manager, played by the talented Bong Cabrera, introduces a new player to the group who are on the fence on whether to keep things going or to fulfill their pact to disband.... full review

Love the premise, love the actors, but transitions are slow, black out every scene is not helping. Script needs to be fix for it to shoot up. ... full review

Interesting premise, but conflict was not really clear. Some interesting scenes, but way too short to even develop into something.... full review

A very choppy script with a lot of very short scenes.... full review

A nice review by Gia On The Move: https://giaonthemove.com/2023/06/08/hff23-four-reviewed/?fbclid=IwAR1ItGskWMpWjcy3668u3JFGL9cRfKrI8_x-jjUQo131kzVmXJuU48p5hKQ... full review