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Review by anonymous
July 24, 2023 certified reviewerWhat I liked
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Funny in parts, heartwarming in parts, but the script needs work to turn it into a play. It acks dramatic structure, which it need not, because the parts are there. For example, were the Bristol Farms scene broken into three four parts, it could provide the scaffold: 1) broke and exhausted, she needed to find a way to feed herself, is envious of customers at Bristol Farms; 2) weeks later, at BF again, she discovers the free samples strategy, including complimenting the tattoos; 3) late or end of play, in remission, she returns to BF with her own tattoo.
