The vivid way the story brought the characters to life. I could picture them perfectly, just based on their descriptions alone.
What I didn't like
I didn’t dislike anything about the story at all. The only room for improvement is that the lighting was kind of dark, and sometimes it was hard to see the performer’s face. A spotlight on him would’ve been good. Also when he stood in front of the slide projections, you definitely couldn’t see the details of his facial expressions.
My overall impression
Great story! Would make a wonderful movie. Have you considered turning this into a screenplay?