Love, Locs & Liberation

What I liked

I liked the history that was presented I liked the use of the pop culture

What I didn't like

Honestly the script needs a lot of work. All the elements are there a just needs to be tightened up. Don’t introduce characters we never see again if they’re significant to you. Use the props you have onstage and please get a director that has you using the entire stage not the same pattern over and over again. Also every character has to have a different physical stance. I am giving constructive criticism and am an Ovations voter. I love what you’re trying to say but I didn’t get the love locks and especially the liberation that was in the title and I love your title. And courage you to find a drama turg somebody to help you really formulate and organizing structure your script it was all over the place and I wasn’t sure what character you are doing all of the time. I would also love to know more about how having Caribbean’s parents affected things and would love to know more about your the men in your life. I felt I was cheated by not hearing the entire story and the pain that you went through. Dig deeper. There is more there.

My overall impression

Though the subject matter is important the presentation could be a lot better