Cold Fusion

My overall impression

I especially liked this play because it was about a subject I knew something about, since I am an energy journalist. The writing and acting were especially good, in particular the tension-building.

I do have a suggestion – I wold have preferred that our hero be arrested and locked away. I recommend you write more story and turn it into a full-length play with the government patent lawyer and “Shelley” being driven further into conspiracy. You can see the play has really stimulated my imagination.