What I liked
I enjoyed coming into the space and seeing subtle hints of NYC subway everywhere: the bench, the floor signs, the trash can and appropriate garbage, and the HYSTERICAL movie posters! Combining the set with appropriate lighting, sound effects and kicking music also gets a nod.
Both actors embody their characters’ quirky nuances and have a relatable, albeit, awkward banter established. As Galen, Newton Mayenge showcased a guarded, reserved, and put-together man who is quietly dealing with heartbreak. Opposite him is Jenni Chiaromonte’s Robbie who is overly talkative, probing, and totally relaxed with her tank of nitrous oxide. And she gets an automatic win for a t-shirt that says it all!
After they both take hits on the “Sweet Air,” they “go to crazy together” discussing a myriad of topics. And one of my favorite connection points was the love of Muppets, because, let’s be honest, who doesn’t love muppets?
What I didn't like
So much of this piece is about the chemistry between these two strangers. At times, I really felt it and other times, it seemed stagnant.
Having them seated for such a long period of time, while realistic, had me lose focus. I was hoping for more physical action/movement. If one character is a bonafide germaphobe, why not take advantage of him constantly being repulsed by a filthy, dirty subway?
On the writing front, Sweet Air is too heavy on exposition. Perhaps introducing the “sweet air” sooner/faster and watching it play out would help. For me, I craved moments where the strangers could also just sit in silence with each other. Some judicious cuts would make the overall messaging stronger.
The break-out musical dance number came from out-of-left field and seemed a bit odd.
My overall impression
Sweet Air is an intriguing comedy, that is neither rom-com, meet-cute, nor about falling in love. What it is about is connection – between strangers. The writing is clever, witty, and is not shy about sharing certain truths. For example, the ease with which people can sometimes share the most intimate details or secrets about themselves with a perfect stranger was spot on. This two-hander offers a unique perspective on a genre with a catchy name: platoni-com!
