Review by anonymous
June 17, 2024What I liked
I loved how the grandfather stories shape the woman to look for the man she loves. I love how the man’s stories how he viewed himself. I enjoy that their love they found ways to deal with their life together.
What I didn't like
The issues tackled are important to explore. Identify how to incorporate story better.
There are sides of the story. Please periodically act together more throughout the play to reinforced how this marriage works. Blending the wedding topic together would be very fascinating.
My overall impression
This story has many good elements. This marriage is wonderful. It is a pleasure seeing what works…what doesn’t. There are too many distinct stories told separately distracting from the overall effect. Having the two of you come together periodically would help the blending of the good with the bad times. Identify how to fit them in the story better.
