What I liked
I really enjoyed the writing and I liked how relatable it was. The story will resonate with any age, gender, or culture. There were many times I let out that “testimony” grunt. I giggle, grunted in agreement, and I really enjoyed the performances. The chemistry was so good that we believed they were friends. Well done!
What I didn't like
I would love to see what happens after the hair cut. Do they remain friends? Does the phobia get better? Or does a big melt down happen with a bunch of “hypotheticals” being spewed out. Did the shampoo bowl table top accidentally fall down? Enquiring minds want to know… ☺️
My overall impression
Unusual name… yet VERY relatable. It’s like being a fly on the wall and witnessing a very real conversation between two REAL friends. For those who may over think situations and explore hypothetical scenarios… you will feel seen. Basically that’s pretty much all of us, at least once in our lives. 😉
