Both your performance and delivery were great. The stories flowed well together and it all made for a hilarious romp that was fresh and unexpected. Really, your timing and delivery were top notch. No notes on this!
What I didn't like
At one point, you are talking about playing “fill the hole” — great tale by the way — and how you found the dildo and magazine in some hole in the sink?
It was not at all clear as to what you meant. At least not to me… What hole? Huh? Maybe a sentence or detail was missed here? But I was left confused about where exactly such a thing could be hidden in a sink? Now this is a really small thing. Easily fixed. And really my only note… sorry I know it is hilariously nitpicky. ;)
My overall impression
Fun, fun show. With lots of twists and turns. All hilarious.