The pacing was appropriate. I liked your willingness to engage the audience when appropriate.
What I didn't like
Perhaps it was the virtual performance (and the angle of viewing), but the lighting was uneven.
My overall impression
Bravo, Meg. I applaud your perseverance in the journey, recapturing a passion of your heart and inviting us into your heart-warming and heart-breaking story. You expressed vulnerability and honesty about the highs and lows, inviting us to remember and live in those spaces in our lives as well. The vignettes were engaging, filled with details that helped us envision our place with you. I wish you much more success and joy as an actor.