I thought the detective was a stand out performer; totally believable in his role, nailed the monologue and had great comedic timing; never giving away the punchline too soon.
The girlfriend was totally believable in her role and you could tell she was full invested in the character plus that character’s backstory to read as authentic as possible.
What I didn't like
The budding “bromance” was believable via dialogue, but would’ve liked to see body language cues that also alluded to this message.
My overall impression
I really enjoyed the show – at only an hour, it was quick, told a full story, and had some really funny moments that made the whole crowd laugh!