I liked pretty much all of this show. Liked the harmonica interjections. See my other comments. Liked the device of certain lines said in unison.
What I didn't like
Add more projected images throughout, and a few more harmonica interjections here and there. The performers, non professionals performing their own story, were very effective. With more familiarity thru repeat performances of the work they will become even more comfortable, as well as sure of their lines. (Just a couple places showed). So I’d say, just keep doing it!
My overall impression
A thoroughly entertaining and enlightening show that sheds light on the journey of two people in love with each other, one of whom happens to be Trans. A warmly told story of much triumph, as well as some heartbreak and sadness. A revelation, and somewhat of a primer, on Gender dysphoria. Highly recommended, not only for those expanding their knowledge and acceptance of those who are Trans, but for it’s sheer entertainment value.