The idea of the show was great, and the performances were strong
The preview ran way over time – a cardinal sin. The songs were too much of the same and needed more variety (there’s a reason for the pop songs in Hamilton), and the story can be tightened.
Full writeup at https://cahighways.org/wordpress/?p=15377
The show was an ambitious idea and had good performances, but our preview performance ran way long — a cardinal sin for Fringe.