I thought the writing was a bit skewed, potentially because of industry experience and the men in that industry, and the direction tended to overplay a bit.
My overall impression
The show was a valiant attempt at achieving [the goal stated in the Fringe writeup]. However, it was a Fringe show, and thus at an early stage of development. There were some problems with the writing and the direction, at least from my point of view, that clearly needed some work. But the spirit was clearly there, and it was, for the most part, enjoyable.
Full writeup at https://cahighways.org/wordpress/?p=14348