I loved the powerful singing, the characters (especially “Shame” which was as difficult to face in a theatrical character as it is in one’s own psyche!), and the weaving together of the various narrative threads.
What I didn't like
I don’t believe it needs to be improved upon. I could see developing it to explore other stories and evolve and change, but it’s an honest and real piece which works!
My overall impression
This is a powerful, honest work about an individual experience which will reveal your own experiences.