Great, intimate location. Wonderfully real, funny script. Enjoyed the spacing and rise and fall or action throughout.
What I didn't like
Some of the jokes didn’t land exactly the way I thought they could have landed. What I mean is that this is a great starting ground for seeing what works and what doesn’t in front of an audience. For the most part it worked and it was funny. Other times it fell a little flat.
I also thought the ending was a bit rushed. Perhaps there could have been more dialogue as the couple got older. As scene in those few brief scenes when they’re old. Maybe I just didn’t get it.