The writing was excellent! The storyline complex and multilayered. The action was character driven with strong goal, motivation and conflict. The 3 storylines were woven together well and made sense. I really didn’t see any unnecessary content other than a bit too much profanity.
The characters were well developed.
What I liked best was that the story asked lots of questions. Very thought provoking.
What I didn't like
The ending was a bit over the top—- a bit like the bomb in the closet that you didn’t know was there. I needed a bit more context for the nuclear holocaust ending.
I think the holocaust ending was counter to the rest of the thought provoking story.
My overall impression
Lots of talent! The writer is especially talented.