I loved the writing and intentions behind the piece. I love the breakdown of emotion in the second half.
What I didn't like
Just a bit of polish which will come with time. Could be shortened overall and the first half could be shortened to emphasize the reveal
of the second half.
My overall impression
This was the perfect blend of comedy and statement. A necessary jab at the for-profit healthcare industry and a glance into the world of someone with a chronic illness.