The secondary characters weren’t well developed, and the framing story arc wasn’t clear enough. The ending felt confusing – why would a couple looking for a home consider a funeral home, and then immediately pivot to a business opportunity? You established that the funeral home owner was a sharp operator who had driven all of the other funeral home out, and that he was kind of incompetent. Which is it? If he was a sharp operator and had the only funeral home in town, why wouldn’t he be selling git as a funeral home.