The Key to Success

What I liked

It’s a really smart idea that points a finger at capitalism and what it means to be “successful,” loved Gil, Gilly, and the Dr. as distinctive clones and larger characters, fun set-up with the doors

What I didn't like

Some of the minor characters needed to develop personalities/quirks in order to stand out in such a wild concept: the general and the “spy” in particular. It’s important they aren’t just reading lines as pawns in a greater world. I think it is completely possible there is a version of this script without the “spy” who distracted from the fun and told us what we already knew.

My overall impression

The bones of this script are extremely solid, and just need a bit of refinement and some strong character actors to work!