A couple small adjustments for more clarity in the script, and possibly an alternative stage direction for the audience cue cards bit (as a part of the play), but these were minor things, and for all I know the story was trimmed for time’s sake. The acting, the characters and the story were all captivating. Great work!
My overall impression
I loved it— excellent work by Verity, Austin, Alef and Jim.
The script and story were very good, the characters nuanced, and the performances were great. This play was definitely one to remember. It was such a stand out this year at Fringe and deserves to be recognized for it!